Comments on: Chapter 8: Nice Guy, No Hope

By: ~kevin

~kevin — Tue, 13 Feb 2007 19:25:22 +0000

we should create a seperate “team” blog where we can post our serials and/or recurring character shorts. I started another one today besides my Second String story that is pretty intense, but I didn’t want to post it simultaneously with Second String. So I thought we should create a blog with a collection or library of our stories that people could pick and choose which one they wanted to follow…

And anybody in our circle who wanted to write could contribute. What do you think?

By: ~kevin

~kevin — Mon, 12 Feb 2007 15:24:53 +0000

My senior year crush, a junior on the swim team, pulled off the ultimate insult. She started dating my biggest rival, the guy I guarded for four years from the Downey High water polo team and hated with a passion. Much like Mike, had I let her know how I felt earlier, I could have had her on my arm instead of seeing her around town on his. Thanks for all the memories, Nathan.

By: nathan118

nathan118 — Mon, 12 Feb 2007 14:38:04 +0000

Pretty funny how I didn’t specify the sex or sexual preference of the clerk, but simply using the word “ravishing” was all I needed to say “gay dude.” I love it. You’re both correct.

Copying and pasting my html code messed up my formatting a little. A couple paragraphs are supposed to have bigger spaces between them to show they’re different “scenes,” but it ignored me. *Nevermind, I fixed it.

By: Trento

Trento — Mon, 12 Feb 2007 07:57:37 +0000

Me too Amy. In fact I thought that he even wrote “he” but I guess I’m wrong.

By: amy

amy — Mon, 12 Feb 2007 06:24:07 +0000

oooooh, the plot thickens!! i am not sure if the clerk at the tux shop was a woman in your mind or not…but i definitely heard a gay man saying that the green would look ravishing…it was awesome.